Relevant History welcomes national best-selling and multiple-award-winning mystery author Kaye George, who writes several series: Imogene Duckworthy, Cressa Carraway (Barking Rain Press), People of the Wind (Untreed Reads), and, as Janet Cantrell, Fat Cat (Berkley Prime Crime cozies). Her short stories appear in anthologies and magazines as well as her own collection, A Patchwork of Stories. Her reviews run in Suspense Magazine. She lives in Knoxville, TN. For more information, check her web site and blog, and look for her on Facebook, Twitter, and Pinterest.
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One day I decided I wanted to write about something in the past. I rejected a few periods, mostly because I had studied them in history class. It seemed to me, at the time, that history consisted of memorizing dates and wars, with a few kings and queens. Boring! It was only after I left high school and started reading historical fiction that I realized some of those periods were interesting, even fascinating.
What else was there?
However, lots of people were writing about those times. What was there that no one had done before? Here’s where my interest in anthropology kicked in. I was an avid fossil hunter at one time and used to have a terrific trilobite—wish I knew what happened to that!
Add in the fact that Neanderthals, long thought to be low-browed savages, were turning out to be misunderstood. As scientists sequenced one of their genomes, startling discoveries were made. One that they sequenced was red-headed and probably freckled! When you considered how many thousands of years they thrived, then factored in the climates they survived, everyone had to drastically change their opinions of their intelligence.
Conflicting theories
I ordered a few textbooks and heavily underlined and post-it-noted the pages. I found that, for every theory, there’s a conflicting one. Perfect for a fiction writer! Some said it was unlikely they could speak. Others said that of course they could. Some said they buried their dead with ceremony, others said probably not. So I was able to pick and choose what fit my fiction.
No one knows how their society was ordered, so I ordered it to suit myself. My tribe, the Hamapa, is matriarchal with the wise old woman as the leader, advised by two of her male partners. In order to be able to describe things to the reader from outside, I chose one main character, Enga Dancing Flower, who was adopted into the tribe with her twin, Ung Strong Arm. It is assumed that her tribe abandoned her and her sister, as very small children and near to the Hamapa tribe, because they could no longer feed everyone. I chose another main character to be a young male of the tribe, Jeek, still a child, and younger than Enga Dancing Flower.
Language?
I had the most fun inventing their language, since at one time I considered majoring in linguistics in college. Going from a French major to Russian, I sort of gathered some linguistics. Putting together knowledge about how babies learn to speak, how disabled people manage, and early language studies, I used only the sounds easiest to make, just in case it was hard for them to speak. Also, they save the spoken language for ceremonial announcements and communicate mostly by telepathy. (Not a theory by anyone but me. But, hey, if the Australian Aborigines can do it, Neanderthals might have.)
Where to put them
One problem was setting. I knew I wanted to use the end of their time on this planet as a separate people, about 38-40,000 years ago, but I didn’t know much about Europe or Asia then, which was just before the last Ice Age. I did know something about North America (and learned a lot more!). Then it came to my attention that the theory of peopling the Americas was being called into question. So I decided it was people much, much earlier than the main theory (and now that theory is almost totally debunked in favor of earlier migrations). Why not let the Neanderthals go just a bit farther east and come on over?
The advantage of doing that is that I can use the mega-fauna that existed on this continent in those days: mammoth, mastodons, saber-tooth tigers, dire wolves, flat-faced bears, giant beavers and sloths. Everything was gigantic! And presented challenges as food sources for my tribe. The approaching glaciers from the north were also driving the game south as the story opens. Some neighboring tribes were having a hard time feeding themselves.
Other prehistory fiction!
I’ve recently made the acquaintance of a group of prehistory fiction writers who write the gamut, from fairly recent times, just before the discovery of the Americas by the Europeans, to 70,000 years ago. It’s fun to share our interests in primitive peoples. If you’d like to know more about them, visit the group. Some of the other writers (all fiction—I’m the only mystery writer) are Mary Black, Kathleen Rollins, Bonnye Matthew, Ron Fritsch, Michael Gear (of W. Michael and Kathleen O’Neal Gear), Simon Townley, Sandra Saidak, Gary McCarthy, and Sharman Russell. (Though I might call the Gear books at least part mystery). If you like prehistory fiction, look up all of these!
More respect for the Neanderthals
By the way, one marker of progress is that I read, in a textbook published well after 2000, that scientists all agreed that Homo neanderthalensis didn’t interbreed with Homo sapiens. Today, I know that I’m 2.9 percent Neanderthal from a simple DNA test I took a couple of years ago. The old myths about these long-misunderstood people are falling day by day! They were added to the genus Homo only very recently. I’m so gratified that some of my theories about them are being added as new discoveries. I love writing about my Neanderthals!
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A big thanks to Kaye George. She’ll give away a trade paperback copy of her book, Death in the Time of Ice, to someone who contributes a comment on my blog this week. I’ll choose the winner from among those who comment by Friday at 6 p.m. ET. Delivery is available worldwide.
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Thanks for giving me the change to shed some light on Neanderthals, Suzanne. Great to be here!
You’re welcome, Kaye. I’ve been interested in Neanderthals for decades and have always felt they got bad press. I’m glad for your enlightened approach.
Fascinating! I will definitely have to check these out. I enjoy semi-historical fiction and your research for it sounds like it was quite fascinating.
My research was long and arduous, but the most fun I’d had in a long time. I’m anxious to get my other obligations handled so I can get onto the sequel(s). Thanks for stopping by, Amy!
Thanks for the shout-out Kaye! I enjoyed learning a bit about your process for writing prehistoric fiction. Writers have to weigh every decision, whether it’s about what research they use or what word best expresses their vision. Fascinating!
You’re welcome, Mary!
Thanks, Kaye, for such a lovely post. I’m glad you chose Neanderthals.
It may be that they chose me. With all the new discoveries about them, I couldn’t keep quiet.
Looking forward to reading your book
Thanks for coming by, Susan!
What better period of history to write about than a period no one can refute. I think it’s brilliant. I applaud you for your research, Kaye. You obviously loved doing it.
Actually, with all the ongoing research, I do live in dread that something I made up will be discredited. In that case, I plead artistic license.
Kaye, funny you should mention that. I originally set my 24th-century science fiction on a terrestrial planet orbiting Alpha Centauri A. But so many extra-terrestrial planets have been discovered recently that I realized it was just a matter of time before the attention was focused on Sol’s nearest star-neighbor. I imagined astronomers identifying Jupiter-sized planets but no Earth-sized planets in that solar system, and that was enough for me to switch everything to a fictitious solar system modeled after the Alpha Centauri system. 😉
Polly, unfortunately there will always be someone sniffing around to refute the historical details that we so painstakingly research and recreate. The same goes for a futuristic science fiction story.
I didn’t know any of this, Kaye. Thanks for sharing! Fascinating stuff. (I already read the book, so don’t enter me in the giveaway.)
xxx, Edith!
Sounds like a very interesting premise. With all the new discoveries in the field of early modern humans and their relatives (Neanderthals, Denisovans), there’s certainly a lot of inspiration for the right author.
You read my mind, Larry! Denisovans will show up in the next book, for sure.
It’s great to see you here, Larry. Thanks for stopping by.
I loved Death in the Time of Ice! It’s a great book, and different enough to give crime fiction a whole new outlook.
Thank you so much! Different is what I was going for.
Kaye, I’m glad you plan a sequel. I am in awe of your research and organization. I keep following a path of different ideas and find myself miles from where I want to be. Love history not discipline! Thanks Suzanne
You’re welcome, Georgia.
Hey, my plot ending up VERY different from what I planned. I changed the killer and lots of other things. You can’t plan life and I don’t think you can plan a novel either, but I keep trying.
The book has a great cover image, Kaye. That mammoth looks like he’s ready to charge right at me.
I love it, too! I was asked for suggestions and gave some vague ones, but mostly that I didn’t want pastels, but darker colors. I was so pleased when I saw it.
I feel a special bond with the Neanderthals as I’m in Gibraltar, which may have been their last stand against Cromagnon. Perhaps I should check my DNA – there may be quite a few Neanderthal genes there! (The first Neanderthal skull was discovered here, but not recognised until after the Neander Valley find).
Good luck with your Neanderthal detective. My detective is a Gibraltarian, but in the 19th century – some 30,000 years too late!
Thank you for commenting, Sam. I’m flattered such a distinguished author is visiting my post! I’ve never known anyone living in Gibraltar, but it’s a place I’d love to visit, along with the Neander site itself.
Anyone with European extraction is supposed to have from 1 to 4 percent Neanderthal DNA. I got mine tested at 23andme.com.
I’ve only tried writing one historical short story. That story was set within my lifetime. Once you get old enough, your youth can be considered historical! I can’t imagine writing outside of modern times. I loved the book, and I’ve never seen a better cover. Have fun with the next in series.
Thanks, E.B. One of the things to be cautious about when writing historical fiction is anachronistic word usage. Like not having people use radios before they were invented. In this case, I tried to use the simplest words for terms that prehistory people would not have known, like summer, winter, 4:00, feet, inches, saber-toothed tiger, even mammoth. I did end up having them think in English, just because everything else I tried was too cumbersome to be read. It’s hard, but VERY fun.
I’ve noticed the same thing in my historical fiction- more fun the farther back I go, as there is less known and more for me to make up. Definitely on my must-read list. Now we know that if anyone besides H. sapiens made it into North America early it would have been the Denisovans- known from one finger bone!
Yes, Roger, a very important finger bone! What else is here that hasn’t been found yet? Exciting to think about.
What fun! Mysteries and science fiction & fantasy are my favorite fiction reading, and anthropology/archaeology and history in the non-fiction. Love the idea of a Neanderthal detective. Once I retire (end of December) and finish the never-ending dissertation (by May or it’s ABD forever), I will have more time for fun reading and I’ve just added your book to my ever-growing To Be Read list right near the top.
Leslie, I’ll bet you’ll be amazed at how your time gets eaten up after you retire (and finish your dissertation–yay for you!). It took me a few months to settle into a brand new routine after I retired, but I do LOVE setting my own schedule. Stay up late and sleep late for me!